page 2:

[..] All new entity registrationsperformed on or after that date [..]
[..] All new entity registrations performed on or after that date [..]

[..] SHALL be accurately reflectedin entity metadata [..]
[..] SHALL be accurately reflected in entity metadata [..]

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[..] make use of the Federation Operator’s registryto register entities [..]
[..] make use of the Federation Operator’s registry to register entities [..]

[..] becoming a member of the Federation as an Identity Provider isdocumented at: [..]
[..] becoming a member of the Federation as an Identity Provider is documented at: [..]

[..] the prospective member has legal capacity andrequires [..]
[..] the prospective member has legal capacity and requires [..]

[..] for example asa result of corporate name changes or merger [..]
[..] for example as a result of corporate name changes or merger [..]

page 4:

[..] indicate that the Federation Operatoris the registrar [..]
[..] indicate that the Federation Operator is the registrar [..]

Reformat the RegistrationInfo metadata extension example, from:

<mdrpi:RegistrationInfo
registrationAuthority="https://efis.ethernet.edu.et"
registrationInstant="2021-11-29T13:39:41Z">
<mdrpi:RegistrationPolicy xml:lang="en">
http://efis.ethernet.edu.et/docs/MRPS20121110</mdrpi:Registration
Policy> </mdrpi:RegistrationInfo>

to:

<mdrpi:RegistrationInfo
    registrationAuthority="https://efis.ethernet.edu.et"
    registrationInstant="2021-11-29T13:39:41Z">
    <mdrpi:RegistrationPolicy xml:lang="en">
        http://efis.ethernet.edu.et/docs/MRPS20121110
    </mdrpi:RegistrationPolicy>
</mdrpi:RegistrationInfo>

page 5:

[..] the domain owner on a per-entity basis and scopecompliant [..]
[..] the domain owner on a per-entity basis and scope compliant [..]

[..] DNS domain names but there canbe left most extensions [..]
[..] DNS domain names but there can be left most extensions [..]

[..] MUST be an absolute URI using the http, httpsor urn schemes [..]
[..] MUST be an absolute URI using the http, https or urn schemes [..]

page 6:

[..] from Federation members needs to becommunicated from or confirmed [..]
[..] from Federation members needs to be communicated from or confirmed [..]

[..] modify the Federation metadata at any time inorder to [..]
[..] modify the Federation metadata at any time in order to [..]