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Comment #Document (Policy / MRPS)Document line / referenceProposed Change or QueryProposer / Affiliation
1Policyall pagesPlease add page numbers 
to the document, if possible
Mario Reale/GÈANT
2Policypage 19Between items 3.2 and 3.3 there 
is an "If" a the beginning of 3.3.
that is shared/mixed up. Clearly a typo
Mario Reale/GÈANT
3Policy page 13Section 4.2.4: please add a reference 
the ngREN webiste URL (hyperlink in 
the digital document)
Mario Reale/GÈANT
4Policypage 8Section 4.3: please make it an hyperlink
inside the digital document
Mario Reale/GÈANT
5Policypage 14Section 5.1.1: "he governing body" 
should be "The governing body"
Mario Reale/GÈANT
6Policy

In section 5, there should be
a distinction about how to join
as a HO (IdP) and how to join as 
a Service Provider (this part is missing
entirely from the document).  These 2
sections should also be available from
the federation website. (they are there

on the website, correctly - it's just that the how to join as a SP is not in the policy document). 

I think there is no section on how to join
the federation as a Service Provider 
Mario Reale/GÈANT















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