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| # | Document (Policy / MRPS) | Document line / reference | Proposed Change or Query | Proposer / Affiliation |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| #1 | Policy / MRPS | general | For the outsider it is not clear what the name of the Identity Federation is. This should be made clear on the front page of the both documents. | Casper Dreef / eduGAIN secretariat |
| #2 | Policy | Introduction | Linked to the aforementioned and referring to the following text: "For EthERNet, the participation in the EFIS is a service among other services provided to Education and Research community" we would suggest to please clarify and simplify it, in something in the lines of "EFIS - as an indentity federation - is a service provided by EthERNet". We suggest to make a clear distinction between the Federation Operator (EFIS) and the NREN (EthERNet) throughout the document. | Casper Dreef / eduGAIN secretariat |
| #3 | Policy | Section 3.6 | change "Service Description" to "the Federation Policy" | Casper Dreef / eduGAIN secretariat |
| #4 | MRPS | Section 2 | Paragraph 2 - typo. "updates" | Casper Dreef / eduGAIN secretariat |
| #5 | Policy | Section 3.1 | Typo in title "Governancef" | Casper Dreef / eduGAIN secretariat |