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Line/Reference # | Proposed Change or Query | Proposer / Affiliation | Action / Decision (please leave blank) | Status | ||||
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1 | 82-83 | "...described in section 3.6" appears to be an error. Section 3.5 describes Dispute Resolution | Albert Wu / InCommon | |||||
2 | 86 | The eSC ToR has an additional item under eSC responsibilities that is missing from the eduGAIN Constitution: "Approving, supporting and chairing eduGAIN Working Groups". Is that omission intentional? | Albert Wu / InCommon | |||||
3 | 218 - 219 | Both mentions of "... as per section 2.2." seem questionable. Section 2.2 describes the eduGAIN Steering Committee.Albert Wu / InCommon | 4 | 118 - 132 | It is unclear from this text who the eduGAIN Service Team reports to, i.e., who oversees the work and performance of this function? | Albert Wu / InCommon | ||
4 | 218 - 219 | Both mentions of "... as per section 2.2." seem questionable. Section 2.2 describes the eduGAIN Steering Committee. | Albert Wu / InCommon | |||||
5 | 283 and 285 | The 2 URLs at these lines begin with "http://". Both redirect to their secure equivalent. It'd be best to point directly to their "https://" equivalents. | Albert Wu / InCommon | |||||
6 | general | The amended constitution still reads like eduGAIN is only a point of metadata exchange among federations. Is that the intent? Is there any work underway to address other matters essential to trusted and scalable interoperation among entities registered in eduGAIN: broad adoption of interoperability profiles; mappable operating (security, privacy, support, etc) policies? Does eduGAIN intend to take an active role in helping newer/smaller federations grow/mature in their capabilities so that there is parity across federations? | Albert Wu / InCommon |
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